All Comments on 'A Summer on the Road Pt. 05'

Please don't wait another two months before submitting part 6!!

Mac

Please continue this, and given Vera's "blessing" of Jane's intentions, please let Paul and Jane go for the fullest contact in making love. And give Paul the full sexy description: I imagine a bit of hair for that hard muscular chest and hair for his abs. He is obviously a very sexy man!

Paul would be a good match for Jane, and vice versa. She would make a good mother for his children. Paul's beginning to see this, and Jane has to be more encouraging. Please keep the loving growing! Where can I find a Paul?

Great story just hope to see the next chapters more often.

Please post the next chapter real soon. Also please get them kussing romantically.

Great story to date and that bedroom scene was damned hot!

Great story, but they should be kissing, It is weird that he is doing all kinds of sexual things yet remains unwilling to kiss her mouth.

Have enjoyed the story so far. I don't envy your decision of which direction to take the story next. It has developed well in my opinion and gives you so many options! Best of luck working on the next chapters, I look forward to reading them.

Supervisor, instructor, mentor, adult role model, and her dad's employee.

Real world issues insert themselves firmly in the cab. 19, college student, immature, limited life experiences, 4 years for a BA, 7 for an MBA if she is going to take over from Dad. Meanwhile he still has 2 young daughters and a career.

An impossible position to be in.

Even though we all know what the destination is it is a great journey!

That is what a romance should be!

Painfully clear - abd Vera cottoned on to it. Still enjoying it.

aha ''part 6" no less

outstanding as usual...5