All Comments on 'A Summer's Breeze Ch. 01'

Pure fantasy, but very horny fantasy! Looking forward to finding out how things progress.

Congratulations on your first submission, keep going. Lot's of possibilities.

You've got what it takes to be a good writer. The story draws you in and keeps you involved.

Though he never measured himself, Donnie was proud of his cock. When he placed his hands fist over fist on the thick shaft, there was always a few inches of shaft with the thick mushroom head poking out above his hands.

Hate these pencil dick fucking authors that have to give A guy A cock that he can use for A fucking lassoo, this was the end of the story for me ,,, try A bit of realism

Will give it an ace for the useless attempt

Commenter complaining about length of protagonist's dick - seriously? This is porn. Want realism, just look down in your lap.

This is a good story! I liked it a lot, & it has potential for more expansion!

I liked the fantazy about Cassie & Aunty, & Mommy!! I'm a confirmed Mother Fucker!!

I'm outta here to read chptr2. Thanks for a good whanker!

two separate but equal solos.

different in age and location.

next?

Heard all my life the saying about the effect of a stiff breeze on a young man; good portrayal. Ah, to be young, again. Those 10-30am hard-ons, at school, like clockwork, just because it was 10:30.

Word to the young.: Don't catch old. It's a long & lingering, often painful malady, with more memories, than new experiences, and, eventually, fatal. LOL

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