All Comments on 'A Summoning Gone Right'

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TheOriginalAnonymousTheOriginalAnonymousover 2 years ago

Interesting start.

Not my usual fare but well-written enough that I found it exciting nonetheless. I hope you continue the story and push boundaries, exploring more kink in future parts rather than recycling the same dynamic again and again. (Which I appreciate can be very difficult; we like what we like, categories in erotica aren't quite as elastic as genres in fiction, we can't move between them quite the same way and be satisfied so long as the writing is good.)

Or, you know... if you have no intention of returning to this story and are going to write something new; either way I'm eager to read your next story.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 2 years ago

Interesting.

I'll be looking out for more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Looking forward to more! I enjoy how you push boundaries.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved this story. I really hope there is a continuation and that hope she keeps him for herself, her adorable little human. I just find their dynamic kinda cute.

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Hello! I'm new to posting my writing, but I figured I'd give it a try! Expect mind control, dubious consent, bdsm, and fae creatures here.