All Comments on 'A Sun Elf's Rendevous'

I am a fan of forgoten realms and it is my d&d setting. Me and my dm discuse things like this and how half breeds can happen. I think it wold be a interesting if you have an other story about her having twins one a half demon and one a half celestial. Looking forword to reading more of your work.

I'm also a fan of d & d and most of my writings are set in the Forgotten Realms. I've been a long time gamer and enjoy reading others stories set in the same setting. The concept of one twin being a half demon and the other a half celestial is quite interesting. Not sure how that would work, though. Still interesting....

Ah you didn't keep it in the same tense through the whole story, there was at least one paragraph where you wrote "She looks" which conflicts with the origian; writing of the story. Have someone proof read next time.