All Comments on 'A Surprise for Liz and Jess'

I have to wonder how many people think these stories relate real experiences. I must admit, I've wondered on a few, (these are ones where the authors are really good.) Our goal in writing a story of any kind is to get the reader to suspend belief for the time being and actually put himself/herself in the main characters place. When we have readers wondering if the story is true we have almost achieved that goal.

Now to the author; good story, but the use of ....... so much ruined it for me. I admit, I'm not current on British writing--but suggest you use the (--) as shown, for a long pause, and the semi-colon for shorter ones. Using MS Word, ex--ex becomes one long dash. Anyway, good luck with your writing. I'll be sure to read your next one.