All Comments on 'A Surprising Tryst with Stepsister'

Needed a lot of context. Were they virgins? Was she a big slut? Any sign of affection or emotion would have added a lot. Needed an ending, like where do they go from here? More of an outline than a story. Liked your earlier stuff, but this wasn't as good.

Somewhat abrupt ending, but still 5*.

Tc

Give her some time, she'll come around.