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All Comments on 'A Tale of the Technician Ch. 03'

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wdelanderwdelanderalmost 12 years ago
I just gets better and better

OK, I'm a sucker for oddballs, romance, and chivalry, all of which this story has. But the sex is great too! Well done!

Kinggeo327Kinggeo327almost 12 years ago

this is a really good read. Thank you for your series. I hope for a few more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good Story

Keep writing. But please get a proofreader: spelling, jumping tenses, grammar can be improved.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
great characters

They make the story so easy to get into. I'm looking forward to see who Craig ends up with. I'm also glad to see you haven't tried to "cure" Emily.

Jason

arrowglassarrowglassover 9 years ago
Sure keeping my interest!

Really like how this story is progressing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Needs better editing

Needs better editing

FinalStandFinalStandover 6 years agoAuthor
Ugh!

I know. I know. I've been working on it ... kinda/sorta.

James aka FinalStand

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Getting Better

Finally our hero, surrounded by girls he has helped, is getting some! That part has been very frustrating in prior chapters!

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First off, I thrive on feedback; so please fire away when you get the urge. I read it all and it often brings different perspectives. The main thing making me a little unusual is that I'm bi-polar … with some serious medication on board to stay semi-normal. My other character...