All Comments on 'A Taste of Chaos Ch. 01'

Brilliant. When's the next chapter, can hardly wait read it.

Nice start

Cool story. As a suggestion, maybe the two male Sins could fall for Damiex too? I mean he is the ruler of list, it would make sense for him to be pansexual. (Mobile sorry)

Brilliant. This universe was one of my favorite storylines, glad someone is continuing it.

Totally fucking incredible! I have no idea the amount of time you needed just for this chapter but that alone is worth five stars. This storyline is brilliant and it is amazing that this is just chapter one. You have mixed so many interesting and unique things in this story like the vault and the weapons you decided to have in there was such a wild and varied mix and yet it makes perfect sense considering how long this world/plane level/dimension has been around which also allows nobody being required to know how it came to be in the vault. The more of this I read, the more I fell in love with it and even though it was ten pages, I still wanted to continue reading it. This is the type of story that becomes like an addiction and I cannot wait to get my next fix. Thanks for everything you put into getting this together and out to the masses, I am sure it was no small feat.

J.D.

Thank you all for the comments and encouragement I really appreciate it! There were a TON of typos and such in this chapter that I didn’t catch until it was published so I will be fixing that and re-submitting here in the next week or so. Chapter 2 is just as long and these will roughly be the normal chapter lengths. Chapter 2 should be published any day now as it was submitted several days ago and is still in pending status. I’m partway through writing chapter 3 and am really enjoying writing this story. Thanks and please keep commenting and voting!

DaddyIrishman

I hadn't actually read the original Lost Lord series until now.

Having read A Taste of Chaos ch1 first, then gone and read maybe half of LL: So far I think I prefer DaddyIrishman's writing style. Maybe too early to say which story I like better, but it's a close run thing.

Thanks, I really liked The Task’s world and I did like the story line too. It’s not one of my very favorites as the writing wasn’t up to some of my favs on this site like Tefler, FinalStand and EmotionalStorm, but the world and universe was so unique and it was abandoned so I took my own stab at it while using my own twists and ideas as well. There are some tweaks but it’s fairly close to The Task’s world.

I’m waiting for the next chapter to post, maybe later today or likely tomorrow but it was submitted a few days ago and is pending. Like this chapter it’s roughly the same length and these will roughly be the chapter sizes I publish. I’m already working on writing chapter 3 but am only partway through.