by Thors_Fist
Also a very relived reader. After having read WBDP I had been worried that the story might go in a different direction, no problems so far though. Many thanks for sharing your story.
Although I still don’t share John Norman’s approach.
Tess (UK)
I agree with all previous comments; great writing, good story. John Norman was/is a bit misogynistic IMO - he seems to believe ALL women should be/want to be, slaves. Obviously not the case, though I accept that some may enjoy his brand of D/s. Too harsh and impersonal for me, though.
5*
Dixon (UK)
Second time reading. . . .enter GWEN & SHARON. VERY memorable introductions ! When JULIA realised that she had been lacking as a wife before slavery, it was very revealing and key to the spirit of this story. I wonder how many wives reading this upped their marital game ?
Your writing, as usual, hits all the marks. Someone should chain you to a computer and have you do nothing but write, write, write. Keep it up.