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Click hereThat brings me to Becky. Becky was not even a gleam in my eye when I started this story, which means the ending has totally changed by the time I get to it. She's a random person who delivers a pizza towards the end of the book. Becky wouldn't leave me alone. 'Please tell more about me,' she said. So pizza delivery girl, how old are you? What's your background? What kind of person are you? Why are you begging for your story to be told? How do you fit in with all the other characters? I have my ending and it's different from how it began.
Of all the characters in all the stories I've written, Sam of WBDP and TOS is probably most like me. Not me, but most like me. This doesn't mean I've done any of the things Sam has, though there was a diet plan, conceived by my wife. There are pieces of me in all the characters, for in order to imagine them, I have to know them. And the only way to know them is know myself. I'm a complex person. Because I might think something at one point in time, doesn't mean I've done anything in any point of time, nor that I would still think the same thing now as I did forty years ago. But I probably thought about it once upon a time. I think that's why some of the characters beg to be written, because it was a thought I had, once upon a time, which needs to be brought to some conclusion. Just like a wife reading sexy slavery novels. If you're one of the people who read all one million plus words; congratulations or I'm sorry. Congratulations on your dogged determination or I'm sorry you have nothing better to do with your life than read my musings. Take care and God bless.
- COMMENTS
MikePaulWrites7 months agoThank you oh so much for this great, well written and presented tale of Scott and Julia and company. I guess you could say I am a member of the million word club, having read every bit of this story. I am both sad and joyful at its coming to an end. Sad because I have grown fond of the characters and circumstances, but joyful that you continue to write and make it look so darned easy. (when I know it ain't). I started reading this story at the conclusion of the Beth Wilson stories (Which I am dying for you to continue) and love the tie ins to the Voyage and Descent. I am off to read the WBDP stories and the Cuckold story regarding Richard as they all tie into the Wilson/Rivers continuum. I am also reading the My Husband Fucked Me Over story and am eager to see what happens with Samantha now that Ransom has been dispatched. In all of Literotica, you are my favorite author. Keep up the good work.
Anonymous8 months agoSecond time thru. . . .WOW ! I read over 2 million words of your writing - ALMOST. I did do a lot of skimming, finding the repetition In POV narrative and sex scenes boring. Why twice ? I am a frusturated writer and am in awe of you, DEAR AUTHOR ! All 5 stars ! THANK YOU.
JSA69about 1 year agoThank you, Sir. After reading the comments throughout, I'm off to read WBDP. I expect I'll be thanking you there too.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoThanks for writing & sharing this - I've read it 4 or 5 times now, though I've only commented this time around. For me, only the incest prevented it from being more enjoyable than WBDP. Don't know why you included it - there's loads of incest on this site, very few good, well written BDSM stories.
I enjoyed the setup - was Julia into serving a single strong Master or was the reverse harem scenario what she really wanted? I feel that maybe you weren't sure at the start, followed your nose.
I liked the dual POV idea, and it mostly worked, although (as pointed out by many commenters) word-for-word repetition of scenes sometimes dragged.
Julia - who wouldn't want one? The perfect submissive, later using her knowledge of slave psychology to become an excellent Domina and slave recruiter. A 'bottom-topper' only because she's allowed to be.
Scott - reluctant Master, making mistakes regularly and not always learning from them. As written, he should have enough self-confidence to be a good Dom, but apparently doesn't, focusing more on what his wife wants than his own needs. Human.
Lisa - I'd have liked to have found out more about her, perhaps via conversations with either/both the main characters. Putting lipstick on Julia's nips & pussy at the start as a foreshadowing of things to come was a nice touch. (Yes, pun intended, sorry!)
I enjoyed the minor characters - different enough from each other to be interesting. Also nice to see characters from WBDP reappear and develop as time moves on, particularly Lucia and Dawn. Gotta love Dawn, mouthy as she is! A nice touch that, although mainly hetero, she chooses to live in a good place with lesbians - even though it's a 'cock desert' - than in the bad place she came from. I want one of her, too.
I'm intrigued by the relationship between Lisa & Julia - of the ten (count 'em) couples in the complete family, this is the only one with no D/s element. They are equals almost from the start, becoming a vanilla lesbian couple in a wild D/s household - and both supposedly hetero in the beginning. Neat.
Really did not like the incest, thought it completely unnecessary. I can get that Cindy lusted after her older brother - but that he suddenly discovered that he returned it? Not so much. Including the parents? Yuck.
Some English nit-picks - 'discrete' appears a lot, when I'm sure you meant 'discreet'. You need to get the use of apostrophes right instead of sprinkling randomly - look it up, get it right, it's irritating as fuck, when the rest is so good.
5*, every chapter, thanks for sharing this, and for free. too!
Dixon (UK)
Anonymousabout 1 year agoFor some reason I wasn't happy to see the characters from WBDP with a bunch of kids in this story. It was like lowering their dignity.
