All Comments on 'A Teachers Story Ch. 05'

and keep writting- love this story

Love the story and can't wait to read more about the water rats and Grant's twins. Wishing you all the best.

I bet the twins will be baptised 3 times each.

Thank you for this nice story and I'm looking forward to the next part.

I just hope it will be here soon.

A wonderful story

This story has been a real delight to read. Sure hope to see more chapters.

Just found this great story and had to read it in one sitting. Thanks.

I had to re-read the first 4 installments before this one. Every bit as good as the first time I read it. I cannot wait for part 6. Bring it on! Too bad we can't put a score of 10 here.

yeah you a pretty good writer. i have read everything you have written and i can honestly say i would like some more.

when is the next chapter coming out

I read it in one setting and enjoyed it very much! I am eager for more as are others. May God bless and keep you well.

I am really looking forward to the next part.

I have read and reread this story . The other stories are a great read also, keep them

coming.

Just a hint do not rely on spell checker to do your editing. Small mistakes in spelling disrupt the flow of a very nice story

Ahhh, please continue the story. Getting frustrated waiting for the next chapter. Great story by the way.

Loved it, loved it, loved it!!!

Thanks for sharing such a lovely story. Can't wait for more. Take care, God bless

Hey Yogi: You are one hell ol a writer. Keep us the fantastic work. Love it!!! THANK YOU.

Thank you soooo much. This series was really great!!! Look forward for more of it.

Hi: Just learned that you were not feeling well. Best wishes for a speedy recovery. Miss your writings.

loving - the best kind of tale

DM

Shame. 1* !

and will keep doing so!!!!! So go fuck yourself

I loved it! A complex story line, but well told and the segments clearly defined. Good, strong characters. It was a given that the Water Rats would be good for occasional comic relief, but using the various clergymen for a few laughs was a stroke of genius.

As I read this I kept seeing it as a Disney movie, reminiscent of the Bad News Bears.

If this weren't written so well, I never would have stuck with it for five episodes. As it was, I couldn't wait to get back to the story after any of the several breaks I had to take. I believe that for a product of an amateur writer, this is an exceptionally good piece of work.

I noticed that you posted a Christmas story, your first in a while. I hope that's an indication that you are well enough to return to the keyboard. Best of luck!

Well written, and with an interesting background and the fun anecdotes added to my enjoyment.

Thanks. Hope your health has improved. You and your family are important, we readers are oh so secondary.

This was the type of story that I really enjoy reading. Happy Endings all the way around. Sorry to hear about you having health problems hope things work out for the better for you! Once you get past the problems I hope that you will continue with the story am really looking forward to see how things turn out in the future with them the water rats and the twins. Best to you!

I kept waiting for something bad to happen as it dies in most stories. I am soooooo glad it never happened. I was captivated from start to finish and felt hopeful for once as I'm still single and in my early thirties. Thank you.

I thought this story was one of the best I've read,what I Loved most about it was that it wasn't just a fuck story . the people where real as if this was your life told through the eyes of another ..when can we see this added to

Certainly one of the best that I've read here in some time, romance, love and much erotica too! Well done! I do hope you'll continue this at some point. Thank you!

What a great love story, such a great build up, their love, their marriages (with them being married 3 times to each other) how could it ever fail. One of the best love stories I have ever read. Hopefully it will continue soon. Well done 5 stars

It is fiction, but it is well written fiction. Some of it is not believable, but we live in a time when most movies are not believable. Well written, good story all around!

Can we have more pleaseive read this twice already great job