All Comments on 'A Thakur and His Bahu Ch. 11'

Lustful fun in the Indian sun! (OK, in a house, but why spoil the line?)

Story sounds like the writer is doing what all of us should: write about what you know! There is an authentic voice in this story, although a bit more plot and less stroke would be to my preference. But that is something others may disagree about.

It is quite hypocritic for me to agree with the previous more-plot-less-stroke comment. Man, it is literotica we are reading. One can alwaya skip the stroke for the plot if one likes, but one can't conjure up the stroke just by the plot, not with such marvelous one. Keep on the fine work please.

Fantastic

An excellent piece of story. The most ticklish n difficult situations n problems have to be tackled n solved in their own special way. Nice n fruitful solution found by the Thakur to the well - being and satisfaction for all the concerned n involved parties.