All Comments on 'A Thin Line - The End'

Amazing and imaginative story!

I think he should be pierced, tattooed and branded, for starters.

This is a sad story. Never forget, every relationship has the possibility of ending, but through that you can meet new people.

Wrapped up and tucked in. This is a very nice job of tying up all the loose ends and bringing the story to its conclusion. It is often difficult to perceive how our words will sound when they come back to us. How we justify and rationalize make perfect sense until we suddenly find ourselves on the receiving end! I will point out, however, that of the two central characters, one choose to participate and one did not. I think your story holds a lesson for both sides of the equation. Thank you for sharing.

Very hot. As a switch, I'm turned on and ready for my punishment. Willing to earn back my right to take charge of a worth slut.

Thank you for your wonderful feedback. It gives me so much pleasure that you enjoyed my story.