All Comments on 'A Thousand Ships Ch. 01'

by ElliBeth

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hiteach500hiteach500over 3 years ago

I can’t wait to see the next part!

UltimaMelancholiaUltimaMelancholiaabout 3 years ago

Really good, I look forward to more instalments. I particularly like the emphasis on the wife glorying in her submission, I am sure there are many sensuously abject ways she could worship her Master.

ElliBethElliBethabout 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback! I'm currently working on Part 2, so hopefully I'll have it out in a week or so.

AJeyeAJeyeabout 3 years ago

Lovely story. A great beginning. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I've been waiting since forever for the next part omg pls dun fail me 😭 i can relate to feeling as submissive as the girl so

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Hi, I'm Elli. I'm a longtime writer, but have only started sharing my kinkier works recently. I also write "vanilla" fiction, namely fantasy. Most of my erotic works contain BDSM themes. I'm a submissive IRL and in a pretty much 24/7 ddlg-adjacent dynamic with the love of my l...