by mpqm1968
What a piece of filth. And so pretentious, so phony. This is so bad that I'll bet you think it's good, I'll bet you think people appreciate gross distorted recitals of degrading young women.
As a written work, the tale has no flow, no continuity. Do you not know how to write a scene that flows, through connective phrases, into the next scene? Obviously not.
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That's not writing.
Honestly, this is one of the worst pieces I have read on Literotica.
i liked it, don't let the jerkoffs get to you
Certainly ample room for a sequal. Wouldn't mind sitting down to another read like this. I liked it. Keep it up.
A thoroughly enjoyable story with just a bit of a twist at the end. I'm faintly curious as to whether the roomies got together in between rent raids.
Really enjoyed your story!!! Hopefully there will be another chapter so we can find out what happens to Nikki.
Eros is drooling to sign and publish everything you create!!!!!