All Comments on 'A Traditional Swim Ch. 16'

A top story that I have re-read many times. looking forward to 'seeing' more of Emily and Claire - maybe even some of their friends. Perhaps the Art class would like to do sketches while the meet is on.

I have read this story all the way through and have really enjoyed it. Loving the idea of being able to live in the Caribbean in the nude. The characters of Harry and Sara have been well constructed and have developed a strong level of empathy with a good dose of jealousy.

I HATED this story, but not for a reason you expect. I knew it was the last one, and with nothing to go to next, I have a very let down feeling. Thank you for letting me live with Harry, Sara, and the others for a while.