All Comments on 'A Trance in the Cellar'

good luck in the contest!

My fingers are so slick I'm juicing up my keyboard.

Thank You!

Two words: Loved. It.

So far this has been my favorite story. My only true issue is the whole old woman/Master portion. That was an interesting story stream that I felt was abandoned. I understand it got the two main characters together and helped them do something they would have perhaps avoided otherwise. It just felt like two stories mingled into one. Would have loved more back story to go with that portion. The sex was damned near flawless and really really hot.