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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The POV is some immortal creature? Why the other guy calls him 'boy' while he thinks the other is young?

cayde7cayde7over 2 years agoAuthor

I'm sorry, I'm not sure I understand what you mean; the POV is the younger "boy", whom we met in the first part, and is 22 years old. The man that is present throughout most of the story is about 30, so there is an age gap; apart from that, calling someone "boy" is just a kind of roleplay.

The protagonist still thinks the other man is "young" because he doesn't think someone in his early 30s is old, and neither do I xD

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