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Lori said "I didn't tell you but Mary has a little secret. She didn't tell me what it was, but hinted she might later on."
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FreedomBaseover 5 years agoGood Story ~ Flat Dialog
Your tale sounded feasible, within limits, but your characters don't speak using Street Language. The flair of an inside joke or stepping into the vulgar is lacking. Keep trying; you may get it yet. Thanks for writing this !
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