All Comments on 'A True Hyper Pt. 01'

Very good so far! Keep going!

Promising start.

Little quick on describing the sex - at least for my taste. Also, this part at the end, 'My dick was big before, but I was never able to suck my own cock.' doesn't make sense to me, as I would expect her initial size of 3 feet would be more than enough for her to suck on her own cock, unless part of being a hyper in this setting of yours includes being notably taller than the average person and you just forgot to mention that at the beginning.

All that said, it looks good so far and I'm looking forward to reading more.

Would totally read more