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by Xpoerotica

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evebroughtanaxthistimeevebroughtanaxthistimeover 5 years ago

Three-ways should be declared an international leisure activity. How else will life ever make any sense?

Next chapter please!

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 5 years ago
Sudden Change in Perspective

Overall good story, very interesting. I especially enjoyed the action sequences. I read Part One a while ago and was disappointed not to see a Part Two.

The change in perspective was a jolt, though. It's a common problem, as posting seems to remove spacing and page breaks. Next time just throw in a line that says something like " - - - Golde's Viewpoint - - - ."

XpoeroticaXpoeroticaover 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I appreciate the tip!

Part three is next on the agenda.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

This is a good beginning. I jut wish you would continue it.

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