All Comments on 'A Vacation to Remember Ch. 02'

Another brilliantly written and described story, up to your usual standard. Much hornier than a jack-off story! This new girl is quickly becoming a slut like all the others.

Once again, brilliant, I look forward to more.

The master of infidelity strikes again. X-Factor writes cheating stories better than anyone on this site, and this one is no exception. Great consistency!

I'm not sure why one person didn't like this story. I think he (she) is simply jealous, and can't read a good story. X-Factor consistently writes extraordinarily exciting stories. I'm not sure what the difference is, but a new story from X-Factor is definitely a high point in my week.

As always, excellent work. I look forward to reading your stories.

-jmelborp

I love the story but I wish it would be more realistic. I don't think Angelo would have the will power not to cum inside of Shanti. That is my only complaint. Otherwise MORE MORE MORE!!!

THIS STORY IS CLEARLY HOT, SWEET PASSION. LOVE THE DETAILS OF IT.

Theres no cum swallowing in any of your stories!!! Are you having safe story telling you moron!!!

The author X-Factor truly has a way with words. The words flow very well, and grammatical errors for the most part are refreshingly absent in the stories by this author. The author also knows how to narrate a good story, and the weaving of plot and romance are done so intricately that neither can really be independent of the other. The quality of this work certainly deserves Five stars.