by WannaHaveFun80
Excellent...I can't wait to find out her reaction. Why is she not locking her door? A locked door probably wouldn't keep Sebastian out but in the middle of the woods by herself she need to be more cautious.
It is a great start and I hope you will continue to post. I am a little hesitant to start reading a new story these days because no sooner do I get drawn into a good story and the author stops posting and leaves the story unfinished and the readers wondering how it will end. Hope you will not be one of those authors as I can see myself getting drawn into this story.
I'm curious about why she's so solitary and why he's spending time in/near a forest instead of a highly populated city, with more human food sources to choose from. I'm interested in where you'll go with the storyline. I hope you can either make the chapters longer or post frequently, though.
Man seriously? I was getting worked up. Then uchave to cut the story and hang me on this fuckingly intresting point. Comeon post the next one fast. And pleassse a little longer. Sweet dreams!