by caligula215
Good story. It was really great. It went just a little fast for me. Also, a little too neat, everything was too perfect. Thanks. Keep writing.
Talk about a full service hotel. Very nicely written. The story moved along smoothly, the writing didn't distract at all from the story. Easier said than done.
You have a nice talent for putting words together. I'm thinking that the plot in relationship to real life probability is a little weak, but fantasy is what erotica is all about and in my opinion you did a good job. Keep it going.