All Comments on 'A Virtual Temptress Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Welcome back

Holy hell! This just keeps getting better and better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hooray!

I’m so glad the new chapter has come out. The erotic is exquisite as always! But also I find passages like that “... the overbuilt townhouse was an odd, inelegant structure that blended seamlessly with the maze of similar homes, built by merchants with more coin than taste” really of the field of high quality literature. I think you have a talent. Do you consider to publish sometimes (maybe something not as much porn as this masterpiece)?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Yes!

This is such a great chapter; I'm so glad you're back! More like this please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Thank you for arising from the brink of death

My girl really just pulling a Mary from Record of the Escape from Succubus Castle on poor Templars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Damn, when's the next chapter? I need it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
a virtual temptress

Really great story. Captured by it from first word to last

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

More please?

Wanting to enjoy Dan's dance with Lexi, his consensual renouncing of power to her --- perhaps just because iti s hot and he can trust her (and maybe even doing this whilst smarter and more powerful then his baseline, under the influence of the potions made from her?).

Heh. You dont need my two cents worth. But do write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Love this series, please keep them coming. Seems like this would make a good anime show, with an MA rating :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Interesting twist. Maybe she needs his help with dealing with Dan?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Came back to this series, glad to see there’s more chapters. Lexi can drain me anytime

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I think this is my favorite chapter so far.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Love this chapter, it fits my specific kinks to the point where it feels like it was written expressly for me. I could read this all the time

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