All Comments on 'A Visit to Granny's Farm Ch. 03'

Loving this series, I think they either get caught by Gran and she encourages them or he knocka bella up and they get married and make more babies.

Some ideas I have

The good . They get caught and find out everyone already knows.

The bad . They get caught and big family blowup starts .

The ugly . Turns out that she is pregnant and they have to deal with it .

All of witch could be interesting, but you are the author so do what you do . Good story this far .

Get her pregnant and have them come out to the fam and have them fam being ok with it

doesn't do it for me.

Thanks guys.

I have a decent chunk already written which was along the lines of 'Anon' but it seemed to be going nowhere so I created some tangents. Jimmy has summed up much of it.

Truth be told I'm trying for a twist.

good continuation I see that its going to get a little more steamer now!

I think that you need to get on with it. You have 6 pages, in 3 posts, all the same stuff. It seems like you are going with a preggers theme. Too bad.

Thanks for sharing.