by Ponderer
The description in your story is very vivid and adds so much to the story. The pace of the story is wonderful and the subject matter sublime! Thank you for sharing your talents!
Great story, definitely made me think about my next visit to the petshop. I am sure my girl would love a bone or two.
Enjoyed every bit of this tale. Well written and I especially enjoyed the
sense of humor that floats through the entire thing... rare to find writing
both amusing and very erotic. Thanks
You've been mentioned in the Author's Hangout New Story Reviews.
Relatively well written and descriptive, loved the story. Not too light and not too heavy. <3
I couldn't help but hear James Mason's English voice as I read this.... I loved it. Very well done!
Love your stories. I came :) The ending was great- broke the tension