All Comments on 'A: Visitor Pt. 04-07'

This is a really good story.

Not humiliation or veiled insults, no put downs or outward hostility…just 3 people getting their freak on and that’s ok.

Thank you for writing.

Good story ,waiting for update

What 'magic' Cody have to ignite her ?

Interesting, but so cucky in that hubs does is not present and participating. I will stick around to see the resolution but this seems trending toward hubs licking some other dudes splooge out of her cunt.

Looking forward - Excited

Just another story that rode the train to cuckville. Shocking i say.

Again, THREE parts on ONE page????

Excuse me, FOUR parts on one page????

Don't Listen to the assholes mocking you. I like this story very much. I realize you're not writing it for me, but you can't make it too depraved for my money. I think what would be really hot is not so much Cody humiliating Henry and making him do degrading things, but Henry voluntarily humiliating and degarding himself and getting enormous pleasure out of it. Haven't read the latest installment yet, but I do wish you would keep them coming and have Henry get REALLY kinky!!

Very good so far. The only criticism I have is you have glossed over her 1st meeting with Cody in part one. She went from frigid housewife to sex mad having an orgasm with him and told her husband with no concern. That wouldn’t happen. Don’t get me wrong it’s good but to make great writing it needs to feel real. We’ll done. K