All Comments on 'A Walk on the Beach'

by EctoJohn

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JollyWalterJollyWalterabout 12 years ago
well-written

Very good and erotic short story!

ErosfanErosfanabout 12 years ago
Very Cool

Loved the story, a dream come true.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
sometimes simple stories are the best

I love true life (or could have been true life) stories. This is so sweet and just plain sexy. Your embarrassment and the fact that your girlfriend just undresses you, despite knowing you are scared, makes it all the hotter. Very erotic!

andreinamsterdamandreinamsterdamabout 12 years ago
Somtimes simple stories are the best

I love true life (or could have been true life) stories. This is so sweet and just plain sexy. Your embarrassment and the fact that your girlfriend just undresses you, despite knowing you are scared, makes it all the hotter. Very erotic!

kjgoldkjgoldover 10 years ago
Nice

Very nice, wish it was longer

ErosfanErosfanover 10 years ago

I love this story, would really like to see where this ended.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

What was, might be, figment of imagination . . .

We will only know in our own minds.

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