All Comments on 'A Watchful Wife'

Fantastic story -- especially for your first submission. Any story that gives me a hard-on automatically gets four stars. The only reason I didn't give it five is that I wanted it to be a little longer. (The story, not my hard-on...although I wouldn't mind an extra inch or so.) ;)

Keep writing. A sequel to this story would be hot.

Wonderful story, great theme executed with self discipline and fine wordsmithing.

Particularly outstanding for a first posting. You must be an experienced "closet author." :-)

I'm flattered- I haven't written any fiction since high school, over a decade ago, and this is quite literally my first go at erotica. Another reader emailed and asked if this was based in experience or imagination, and the answer is yes. The premise is real life, the action is all my own creation, tumbled around in my head like a little rock until smoothed. There's definitely more where that came from!

Being pregnant, I can totally relate! Got me wet! Loved it!

This has been a common topic of discussion during see lately. Your story was hot!

I hope there are plenty more to come!