All Comments on 'A Week in the Life of Jim'

Another great story. I definitely enjoyed it.

5stars

Cartoonish and fun!

A fun little tale... it makes me wonder how much is really your life... not the wealth so much as losing a wife to a lifestyle, then lots of meaningless sex before finding "The One".

If so, you must be a happy man... if not, you told a story that seemed real.

Nicely done, and 5/5.

This story feels like cotton candy to me. Fun & tasty. Totally devoid of any substance 😁

A bit sub-par, l had trouble getting into the story.

Had trouble identifying with any of the characters, seemed a bit mixed up and not well thought out.

MIxed up? Yeah I get that, tried to explain it a bit as a succession of tales supposedly linked in a weeks activities but as with everything I write there is no planning it emerges and morphs as I go along so, yeah I accept what you say. Just the way it emerges, Luckily it's not my job, just a hobby.

Started with one idea, changed as I went along.

I stopped reading when you described her as one of the thousand most beautiful women on the planet and was wealthy beyond measure.

Why would she be with you? What do you bring to the table beyond the ability to access a thesaurus and make yourself sound smarter than you actually are?

God i couldnt even make it half way down the first page, before becoming so oired i decided not to waste precious seconds of my life reading any more

Rambling from one fuck to another isn’t a story….

Guess I'm too dense to understand this story

The big cock and BBC myths, the faggotry, the lack of and intelligent continuity, the weak character development, and having the weakest possible plot all combine to make this a 1. I know you can actually write well, so this is a disappointment.

Rubbish. ⭐️⭐️

Mixed up -maybe, that's life!

I liked your efforts,

I like your stories, but this one was hard me to read, too many names in it...

Congrats and stars from here!

Nah, I think this one gone in the foult territory. Ball one…

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You certainly are up and down with your stories. I would consider this as very down.

I see fucknut is still deleting comments. What a pussy.

Hard to get interested in a guy who has all the money in the world (via marriage) then has had sex with anyone and everyone and is still sexing people left and right. Then after so many years decides to settle to one woman. Meh

Got somewhat confusing there a few times, put me off.

Scores 3/5

Not confusing or hard to read.

This story is over the top in many ways, but as you said it is fiction. Kinda goes hand in hand.

Keep writing, and thank you.

Not happening

Change too fast and drastic

Fucking and then fucking and suddenly the One

Great story. Not usually a fan when cucks are involved but this seemed like legit loving wives, and not just selfish sluts.

Who cares...