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But really not erotic. The setup is good, but the sex is so matter-of-fact.

No real description of her teasing. Certainly, no real description of his reaction to the teasing.

How did she tease him? How long? How close did she get him to cumming? How many times? How badly did he want to cum? etc.

Had great potential, but blah.