by intentando
another 2 stars. reasons 1) permeant marker would be like a tattoo, 2) more office workers breaks the confidential clause. If you are going give rules during a story live up yo it or make it known before hand that both parties agree to the change, even if using blackmail for the agreement. I do like the story and the things she is made to do ar done to her, the scenes are pretty good. just stick to the script