by Chris Cross
Well done Chris. It's up top your usual high quality. I too wouild have liked more pictures, but what you've done are excellent. What about having a 3some with Sheila and Belle?
WRITING ( HE PATTED HER ASS) DOSENT COME NEAR THE SAME IN ART. NOT PHOTOS , ART.
Your writing is skilful and stimulating. You arouse me considerably with the word scenes you paint and the suggestion and suspense techniques. I have followed your work eagerly from my first discovery.
I enjoyed this episode, but not as much as the earlier sbmissions. Without rereading everything I am not sure why, but I think that I felt you were getting tired of the series and you were finding a way to end it. The contrast with marie was an attempt at conflict, but not written with conviction.
Your writings are the only ones I continue reading now on Literotica, so I am not saying that I did not enjoy your latest episode. Please give us more - and you don't need lots of pics. They are goo, but your writing is more important.
Thanks for your stories.
He is one wild, horny stud but I would love to be a victim. Oh my god he has stamina and balls.Studs like him are far and few between.Sooner or later he will go through his stable of fillies and have to recruit others leaving behind very sad fillies.
that was so bogus okay!!!! it was so horney and sexist. but it was fun to read it.