All Comments on 'A Week'

GREAT START!!!!!! I'm ready for chapter 2

I like the story already! I love a good office love/hate story! I'm also in love with your other story so update that one soon too!

Please update this every day instead of week. Give us a real week!!

Wyatt should know that she shouldn't let an enemy bait her and let them see they got under her skin. But I guess it couldn't be helped.

I love everything you write babe! Keep it up, please lol.

I knew from the title that this story would insult my intelligence. Firstly the writer lacks any imagination ( like most authors on here) for some reason the main characters are always lawyers or teachers & mob bosses. No imagination or creativity!! Then you make simple spelling mistakes. I know at this point I should stop reading but I try to give you a chance so I read on. Only to find that your clearly struggling to be creative with words to make your story have some substance - so I stopped reading by the time I got to the fifth paragraph!!!

So tired of reading about fucking lawyer characters, can't any of you writers on this site come up with a different career for your characters, there are thousands to choose from.

Don't listen to the haters. This story is very interesting and well written. Good details. Just don't disappear for 8 months and come back and write chapter 2. Good luck!

I am very interested in this story. I was laughing all the way through this first chapter and I can't wait for more. It's been a long time for me since I read a really good story on here. Please post again soon.

I love the competition and hidden lust factor, I hope to read more soon. Merry Christmas :D

I like your story, and I hope to read more chapters. Forget the Haters!

I don't wanthink to wait for the rest lol I absolutely love it

Hi everyone thanks so much for your feedback , I really enjoyed reading most of it & look forward to it in the future! Anonymous it seemed like you posted 3 or 4 comments back to back; for future reference just make an account and email me! The story is already created so if you hate lawyers then no need to read any further. And if I never mentioned this before let me make this loud & clear: I have no editor & do this purely for fun! I'm young & in college so if I'm not completely wasted off my ass or cramming for tests then I will occasionally write a story or two. So if spelling errors like then vs. than piss you off weeeeell whenever you see a post by May_I please skip! I would hate for anyone to go into an uncontrollable rage from my grammatical errors. Anyways thanks loves & for those of you who enjoy don't be strangers message me! =D

Can't wait for more. Great job

Promising...!! :)

Next chapter please;)

Love your story and love your comment May. If there were professional writers up here we would be paying for these stories. I for one appreciate them and hope you don't get discouraged. Ignore the trolls, there is a difference between critiquing a story and just ranting.

I love your story and really hope to hear more.

Love this story! I think it’s a little sad that people who don’t like a story feel the need to complain about it, lambast a really good author, or just overall act like anyone asked them. If you have a problem with the lawyer theme, find a new story. It’s that easy. If you think it’s predictable and didn’t find any enjoyment in reading it. Read. A. New. Freaking. Story! This story drew me in and I give props to the writer. I read the other story and saw a comment about this one so I had to check it out - so glad that I did. In any event, I rest my case. Love the story!! I’ll be reading the other two chapters that I saw and cannot wait! Thanks a million.

- Cinemaestro