by ridgegirl04
I'll admit, had I read the first story before now, I probably wouldn't have read the second due to the grammar issues but I was curious and read the next part. You've got me waiting for part 3 now, congratulations lol. If I may make a suggestion, add in a blowjob scene, have Jason teach her how to properly deepthroat. So far all you've got is some foreplay on Jason's end, not much on Ashlee's end. And I was a little bummed when you left out whether or not she was wearing any high heels with that dress from the first part, I'm a sucker for a pair of CFM heels. Anyways, you're going good, can't wait to read part 3.
Umm...Jason's dominating side came out real fast in this chapter... and I loved it.