All Comments on 'A Weird One Ch. 12'

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XXMuffDiverXXXXMuffDiverXXalmost 11 years ago

Another great chapter, with some unexpected twists, Thanks for the great read and Please keep them coming as often as possible

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 11 years ago
I was surprised that Madge was at Mary's gangbang. party.

I was hoping that Madge wouldn't go and get herself fucked by a bunch of guys, but keep herself to her son, and husband. It made her look like a big slut just like Mary..

I wasn't surprised that Gail was there. and think she is turning into a slut that Bobby needs to distance himself from her before she causes him trouble.

It went about how I thought it would when Madge and Marge got together, and now that Madge and Marge are into a somewhat of a relationship, perhaps Madge will think about not taking part in gangbangs.

A very good chaper, and the story gives me something to look for.

Thanks for the read.

SyrustheVirusSyrustheVirusalmost 11 years ago

I don't like the fact that Madge was at the gang bang either. I don't mind the first time she was there, but now she want's Bob to get an apartment so she can use it for her own private sex pad..... I don't want to use the term whore to describe her, but a synonym to that word might be accurate if she keeps up this behavior. I don't mind her being with Marge, even if that screws over Bobby.

Glad to see Gloria is being given a second chance. However the potentially being drugged story proves Eddie is a douche. The fact that Natasha is not demanding anal makes be believe that she is screwing Eddie as well. Bobby needs to dump her ass, just like he did Gail.

I am curious to see where things go with Nancy. With Ben now having Wednesday, Thursdays and Sunday nights free, Nancy has a legit chance of stepping in and becoming Number 1. The only potential hiccup in that outcome is Vonda. If she is anything like her mother, and lets face it, it is only a matter of time before she and Bobby hook up, there is a real chance that she could become his favorite.

As always, I love this series and can't wait to find out what happens!

RoukleyRoukleyalmost 11 years ago
Goddamn

If Madge has ANY shred of motherly love for her son

she'll tell him that Terrell had his black ass kicked

out of the gangbang along with Gail for what they did.

Otherwise she and Mary are just unloving whores who give

two shits and a fuck about Bobby...

I think Gail needs to wise up and admit her feelings for

Bobby and the two get together, cause they are indeed two

peas in a pod, and Natasha's obviously just some game

playing bitch who'll hurt him again.

I don't buy the drugged up bit from Gloria for a second.

Finally I think Bobby needs to cool down a bit as he's

getting too into the game playing himself... fuck Vonda

and her upturned nose, and if his mother actually let that

Terrell dude fuck her after what he did, then he needs

to drop mommy too

I gotta say that I cannot believe how addictive this series

is to read...game playing shit like this drives me fucking

crazy, but its sooooo hard to resist, damn you JustPlainBob,

anything you post in the future is on my ignore list cause

I cannot keep obessivly checking for new chapters...so as

soon as a A Weird One is done, so am I hahaha...jesus christ

kaidmankaidmanalmost 11 years ago
dynamite

wow I must say I was disappointed with the Madges actions its extremely risky doing gangbangs as all that needs to happen is one of her "crew" gets a job at the plant and suddenly bam the white boy who was joining in on the gang bang is outed as madges son meaning she could get blackmailed by them and that Terrel guy proved he was a douche almost equal to Eddie he really should have went and kicked his ass for his actions because him not showing up is telling the guys he punked out on them and they can take whatever they want from him hell that's the same that happened between him and Eddie and because of that Bob was hounded by him until he had his adult friends back him up personally I think he should drop the idea of getting an apartment because those guys gangbanging his mom has too many chances of it backfiring hell that one guys daughter just needs to complain to her parents about her mom fucking Bob or as she calls him sometimes Marchant and then the guy knows he is fucking his mom now as for the Gail thing she of all people should know better than to do that to Bob seeing as she was in the thick of things when they broke up first and she knows Bobby hates to be disrespected like that

JounarJounaralmost 11 years ago

I dunno what to make of Gloria. She waited a long damm time to tell or get word to Bobby about being drugged.

MarkT63MarkT63about 4 years ago
Racism...

I would cut Mom off due to her "crew" gang banging her. Gloria too. Find a girl that's satisfied with one white guy at a time!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
MarkT63

You are just silly. He is young and has pussy wanting him every day. Why would he say no? And after all is said, it is just a story. A good one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I was liking the story till the gang bang; they really bothered me. The mother totally disappointed me and the MC even more. I really can't understand it. I know I'm a hypocrite but while a love a reverse gang bang, I hate that a man who supposedly loves a woman likes to see her gangbanged...

carlslimcarlslimover 2 years ago

I feel confident you have likely have heard all types of compliments and combines, but OMG!!! This story turned into a HUGE turd!! As soon as there was talk of gangbangs, the story totally changed.. You know the mom seducing her son because she was a bit sex crazed was not "motherly" but the whole "rent an apartment so I can meet my crew" is way overboard.. I am all for polyamory. I have no issue with someone "getting even", but mom is on a whole new disgusting level!! Even Mary broke things off when she was attached.. Mom is now to gross for me to read about.. I feel like Terrell is the worst type of person and deserves to be beaten with a bat for the 1st offense because his type has no respect for anyone.. And after all the MC has done for Gail and she is going to bail on him literally the 1st day after she decides to say fuck Tom.. She was probably my favorite character.. Wow what a disappointment!! 🤮

1028_661028_66over 1 year ago

This just turned to shit,I was pulling for Gail, hoping they would wind up in love..what a disappointment

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesover 1 year ago

Thanks for your writing.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Ugh, lots of issues. First, you called Gail “Gloria”. At the beginning. Not the first time you e used the wrong name. Very distracting. There is also a lot of repetition- his constant harping on Natasha keeping her as loose. Then his speech to Andrea about why he won’t follow her home is a nearly exact replica of the speech he gave Shelly.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

He’s way better off without Gail; she is a freaking nympho. Her breaking their date for a gang bang is a deal breaker anyway.

I agree about the mom gang bangs too. She wants an apartment so she can go back to being the basketball team’s slut? No way that ends well. Just no.

Finally, maybe it happens in a later chapter but Terrell and anyone who participated with Gail should be cut off, if Mary and his mom have any feelings for him.

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