All Comments on 'A Weird Storm...'

Looking forward to the next chapter. I think the word you need to use is taunt and not taught when talking about a tight body.

Nice dream, to bad her husband couldn't dream her away and get a woman that was not so full of herself.

Misspellings are always distracting (in stories and comments). Looks like you hit a nerve for some readers. I very much enjoyed the story, scenes, the character's reverie-which are logical when someone is re-evaluating their marriage and life choices. Although a little disappointed, I wasn't surprised that it was a dream. It must be a little tricky to weave all that action back into anyone's reality in a believable manner. What a dream though! Hope you write more.

I can't wait to read the rest! Loved it and just felt I could totally relate to Laurie!

Right on page 1 it was her husband's fault 🎱

Is there a point to this?

One word: soporific

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Another whore gives it up.