All Comments on 'A Welcome Surprise'

I really thought about rating this as four - 4 - and would have were it not for the additional words in so many spots.

Please read aloud to identify these miniature errors and bring your work the ratings you deserve.

Well written otherwise.

The blend of affection, care, and heat over a story that managed to be both trans-positive and filled with enough detail to give it an igneous vivid feeling made my heart sing while I read. Thank you so much for writing this!