All Comments on 'A Well Planned Quickie'

and with the planned power failure frequently. TK U MLJ LV NV

Good story, good premiss, fine writing.

Thanks

Toylover

Thanks for the story, 5 stars

Nice story.

to find a story about spouses being hot for each other in this site.

The writing screamed "Sexually callenged teen with a penthouse and a thesaurus." So you will delete this and call me an asshole. You can't erase the 2 I gave you for crappy style douche boy.

To the Anon: Thanks, right on the nail. If it hadn't been for all those negative comments about that same notion, on other stories in this cat, I would never have come up with the idea for this. I have never been married, but I can see the greatness in it. I don't plan a sequel for this one, but I have some other ideas for this cat.

Just some FYI: There are repetitive words for a reason, they were meant to mimick the 'same old' feeling of marriage (ha) and make the dialogue pop. This story was also much longer in it's original form, but I condensed it when I thought of the title.

like the pedantic commenter above!!! Great writing kid!

We gotta fly cos mommy's waiting for us in another category!!

cuckeye007 n' saxon_fart.

The tension between them was delightful and brought back memories of times when "the power failed" in our house as well. You never can tell, it may happen tonight.

Again.

Thank you.

How is a person supposed to know if they like it without reading it?

Sneaky bastard.

finally got his creampie

I love it when some whinger trips over his/ her own feet.

Cheers,

Kilroy.

and when they both lose their jobs and are living on the street, he won't have to share her with that pesky job. Of course, they'll be living in soup kitchens and homeless shelters but Fuck it, he'll have his wife.

"I love it when some whinger trips over his/ her own feet".

Kilroy, what's a whinger?

Fumbling fingers can be fun.. especially the kind that slip in the shower...

That's one way to recapture the magic. It's better than cheating.

Different, well-constructed, and fun. A good story.

Not the usual LW story with cheating, revenge, hatred and other non-erotic crap.

Very well written with an erotic plot. A great way to have spouses reconnect, plus she will be even sharper at work because her personal life is in balance.

Thanks for writing.

Good story. I can't pronounce his name but I like the story.

Cute! That was fun. Thanks for sharing.