by swingtime91
Katie is so uptight that she puts off sex for 5 years until she's married, and then jumps at the chance to have sex with someone else when she's married? Doesn't really make a lot of sense.
It's a real turn on to read a story on Literotica that actually is a story and not just a string of implausible fantasies. Not once does the author use the stale language of imaginary intercourse ("Fuck my hot pussy, you big stud…I am your slut whore…etc.")
Imagine a story about real adults! The other reader thinks Katie's sudden interest in sex won't fly, but in how many stories here does the woman (always the woman) get raped and REALLY implausibly turn into an insatiable sex maniac? Plenty.
Thanks for a (rare) literate turn on. Great job.
This story is just short of exquisite. I could not help but wonder how many possibly babies were seeping down inner thighs with the mixture of cum that was mixed between legally married women and men. If that had been offered, this story would easily have been a "1000" our of a possible "100".
Some how I couldn't get into the flow. To little emotions from the wife and some how the whole story had a stilted feel. It could have been improved with an editors help.
Super great story..husband and wife discussed this together .like it should be..then most importantly..they stayed together in the same room to enjoy all their spouses erotic pleasures with each other...5 stars