All Comments on 'A Whore for Islam Ch. 02'

Again, the first 2 stories are a good introduction to what I hope is something more exciting.

Another proof of the importance of good training. I give 5 stars

Pls keep writing

I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment of the story; hopefully it is coming soon? The story so far is good, although a lot of the excitement comes from thinking about what's going to come. Ending the story here would be quite a disappointment for me. There's definite potential in your writing!

I don't know if you're looking for any constructive criticism, but I'll give some anyhow. Since a focus of the story is breast expansion, I think you would do good to put some more emphasis on the process. The majority of the changes currently seem to occur offstage and be treated only to a brief offhand remark. Don't get me wrong, its still a titillating tale: I just believe it could go even further with more in depth descriptions.

this is literally so boring lmao

bro pls make more about this stupid infidel white whore becoming a slut for us superior muslim brothefs

Please write more coming from a Muslim girl

I want to be treated like this so badly and I’m Muslim but I feel so bad because of my thoughts and just wait for my future husband but I do hope that my future husband is like this and fucks me like his whore