All Comments on 'A Wife's Decent Ch. 08'

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodle6 months ago

They’re in their 40’s. This means there is a high risk of a Downs Syndrome child, is THAT what’s best for them? For her child? And how exhausting is it to have a baby in your 40’s, never mind a special needs baby.

Sorry but this wasn’t erotic, it was selfish and thoughtless. They might say “Fuck the rules” but the universe doesn’t care about your wants, it deals with reality and the reality is they will be shitty parents and that’s presuming it’s a healthy child.

I know because I saw that with my now ex gf. Her parents had her in their 40’s and by the time she was 16, they were too tired to care what she did or whom she did it with.

becontree2001ukbecontree2001uk6 months ago

This is such a great story! Love it. I hope there is not a long wait till the next part is published.

MrWilburMrWilbur6 months ago

Really enjoying the series

OnegoodeyeOnegoodeye6 months ago

Great series please carry on

Buster2UBuster2U6 months ago

100 big blazing stars to writer Natural hammer for the ultimate cuck story! Letting wife go out with a stranger just to get a video of them later. Whoa so hot and so scary to be that hubby living out his most powerful sex fantasy. Thanks Buster2U

snarbozsnarboz6 months ago

Kind of odd there is no communication between husband and wife between events.....

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Even with all the warnings I still find this exciting as hell. Love how their black cocks have taken her and now they can do what they want. Seeing blackmen looking at her is like a junkie seeing a fix and she’s ready to lay down for them so they can have what they want. So hot.

AmbulAmbul6 months ago

Very intense and incredibly erotic, and repetitive of the author's other stories. In this one Emily is encouraged to take a black cock and she quickly becomes a whore for only black cock. A bit of hypnosis and she will no longer fuck her husband, but will be bred and have a black baby - or a string of black babies - as 40-something Emily now craves only big black cocks in unprotected sex as often as possible. As always, Chris is confused but seem astonishingly happy at what is transpiring. As in the other stories and despite their protestations of love for each other, Emily is again in her own world where she is totally consumed by sexual pleasure with other men. Again, this is a sexual world where Chris no longer plays a part. His role is that of observer only and he has no power to affect the course of events. It is hard to imagine a future for this couple. Very dark, disturbing, and so very erotic. Definitely a fantasy, and a well-written story, as all the author's are. I gave it a 4

because the almost instantaneous and extreme transformation of a believable character into an object, a receptacle for black cock was not

really believable. Here the author relied on hypnosis and non-stop sexual pleasure. In other stories her total transformation is accomplished with drugs and the ecstasy that comes from all the big cocks fucking

her. Regardless, strangely comepping.

Blackjack666Blackjack6666 months ago

So hot! We enjoyed this part a lot. The development of this story is incredible. Michelle should put Chris into chastity and have him wear the filled thongs all the time....

But it is your ideas and your story, we just love it!!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

"A WIFE'S DECENT"

Decent what?

Decent Meaning - "conforming with generally accepted standards of respectable or moral behaviour."

Or did you mean deScent?

Descent meaning - "an act of moving downwards, dropping, or falling."

AmbulAmbul6 months ago

Will Emily get a Queen of Spades tattoo? Chris encouraged Emily’s transformation; he does not seem to realize that he will be completely left behind and no longer part of her new world of black cock. In the author’s other stories, he has not taken us to that place. To create such realistic and believable characters, it is disappointing that their relationship after Emily’s mind-control/drug induced transformation is not addressed, considering how much of the story is seemingly focused on it. Or was there never much of a close relationship; just two people seeking their own ultimate, and separate, sexual experience, and once found, no reason to stay together? The stories seem to end with Emily’s ultimate drug/mind-control and orgasmic experience and take us no further. Having said this, this story is incredible and astonishingly imagined and well written. I look forward to see how this story plays out.

auhound49auhound496 months ago
GREAT BREEDING STORY!!!!!!!

Please continue many more, at least until she tests pregnant, is officially whored out (How much did Michelle charge those black dudes for the right to impregnate a white slut?) and Claire is also totally corrupted, whored out to blacks, and impregnated, giving birth 1 to 3 months after her mom,

You really need to bring Claire more into your stories. Have them both turning tricks together, pregnant together.

RealthunderforkRealthunderfork6 months ago

Bravo! The fallout of his fantasies wrecking his reality, ruining them both! Thinking it’s play while they become perverted to extremes, until they’ve lost themselves forever. Freaks.

RedCometxRedCometx6 months ago

So glad to see this story continued and left open to keep going. Thank you for your work.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Descent NOT DECENT!

TigersmanTigersman5 months ago

Good story. I really enjoyed a married white wife being bred black. All married white wives should have at least one black baby, preferably two.

DunkirkDunkirk5 months ago

Hope she is black bred several times.⁹

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Whackdoodle doesn’t understand what erotic means. get over yourself u didn’t pay him for custom work go be a social justice warrior somewhere else. His story might have a planet with no down syndrome that’s up to the writer you entitled douche

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Would love have more of this story

francisa123francisa1234 months ago

A very hot series, thank you for writing and publishing them! I really hope the story continues!

AmbulAmbul3 months ago

The less I read about what Chris thinks in these stories the better. This is why I really enjoyed reading “Too Boring” told entirely from Emily’s POV. Her slide into drug-addicted and sexual depravity, told by her as she took one willing step after another willing step was much more straightforward and powerful than the third-party narrative by her husband, with his perverted and twisted view of his wife. For him, Emily seemed no more than an object of his depraved fantasies, not a real person for whom he loves, cares about, and wants to protect. His twisted desires and his impotence serve only as a distraction from the main event: Emily’s slide into all-absorbing drugs, sex, and submission to new masters. Her journeys, if one could call her one-way trips a journey in these stories, is better told by her. In all the stories, Chris quickly becomes an afterthought for her, and eventually she has no room to think about him at all. The reader has by this point also lost interest in what he thinks and feels. Having said this, the author has written amazing stories, compelling and in many ways, frighteningly realistic.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This must continue, one of the best stories on here

JeanCFNMJeanCFNM3 months ago

I have read these with interest

It seems extreme but still carries itself well

Hoping for more

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I like your other stories a lot. But I wish you would continue this one, so we can find out how Emily's date is going on.

Can we expect more chapters soon?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

When is the next chapter coming can’t wait

Samuel71Samuel71about 1 month ago

Fantastic story line. So any possibilities. Please continue.

DavidSilver_GERDavidSilver_GERabout 1 month ago

Great series, which could use a few more chapters. ;-)

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