All Comments on 'A Wife's Fantasy'

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rodryder44rodryder44over 5 years ago
Exciting Interlude

Terrific fantasy.

DunkirkDunkirkover 5 years ago
More

They need to continue. Maybe with another couple

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great post

Wow well written came 1/2 way down didn’t even get to finish but def will save for another day. Write more!

Flat_OutFlat_Outabout 5 years ago
Please don't stop there . . . .

This was an excellent first story! In fact there are plenty of writers publishing their tenth who don't write this well. Plenty of space to amp up the passion!

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