All Comments on 'A Wife's Surprise'

your private mail. Thanks for your effort.

Gary

Pretty good start. A good story but can definitely tell you are either European or English is not your first language. Story would have been much better without some of the words not used in context. Spelled correctly but not what you mean like shore instead of sure.

Great storyline, one of my own fantasies! Again, grammatical and spelling errors detract somewhat. The characters could use a little more development. Keep writing, can't wait to see further efforts!~Minx

In need of some serious proofreading.