All Comments on 'A Woman and a Werewolf'

The theme is basic romance with a dash of adventure thrown in. The style needs more complexity. Some rewriting could help that. Overall it is acceptable. Develop the characters more and add some more descriptive detail.

This story is a nice start, please keep writing, with more practice your stories will be good, as you already have the building blocks for good writing.

When writing dialogue between two characters, you don’t need to keep using their names. It makes the story clunky and disjointed. Using she/he/his/her/etc is more than acceptable.

More than anything, the story needs elaborating. And how come she's able to take in the fact that he's a werewolf just as easily as if he had instead told being a engineer, a foreigner or something else as mundane?