All Comments on 'A Woman's Needs'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fun, well done. Liked the sex part which is why I read these. My 'mature' sex experience was when i was 42, divorced and fucking a high school senior! Damn it was hot. Glad she had to go away to college. It is now 40 years after that...and I am still sexual. Living with one woman near my age, and fucking one who's 16 years younger. Yep! I love sex!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Damn. When 47 is considered old and mature i really feel ancient! She has just reached prime!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Part of being a parent is teaching the next generation how to turn from a self centered child into a responsible adult.

Let's hope Caroline is good at it, now she has to do it with her husband.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Okay for first story but way too much bouncing around. Story needs to flow. Keep at it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Too much bad grammar. (The most noticeable times are when it suddenly shifts from past tense into present for a sentence or so, but that's not all.)

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