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I don't know about how my detective would feel about something like that. He's a pretty conservative guy. I'll have to think about that for a while. I have my muse to help me and I'm sure she'll be more than willing.
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rbloch66about 2 months agoI couldn’t get in to this story too far. Too much rambling about being an uninspired writer. You forgot to give your characters emotional depth. I lost interest after the second page.
WhoGivesAShit3 months agoGood story. It’s interesting how you described his creative process, and how the right woman shifted his subject matter as he grew to know her.
Anonymous3 months agoExcellent
I will admit, I see your name, I will read your new work that has posted.
Nice that Marion was able to pull him out of his shell. While not stated overtly, she seemed to realize that he was a bit of an introvert, as well as probably a good guy. She still wanted to get to know him, and she worked to do so.
I am on Marion and our MC's side. Most mature women have very few problems being attractive if they try at all.
It did feel like our hero was just a tad more ... reserved ... than could be believed, but this story really works for me.
The only real problem was Marion as a decent grill artist. She had not been able to have a grill "in the city," implying that it had been a long time, so this came off a tiny bit "I want this to be one more way for this chick to be awesome that MC lacks," rather than in line with what we know about her.
Still, that is a very small quibble, and MC is a lucky man. Hopefully each of them feels lucky, as a couple.
I hope these two have a good life together, in your head space, and if you write any more about them (excepting the drama that compels such a story along).
Five for you
Anonymous3 months agoAnother good one. This time it's almost as though you know what being a writer is all about! Oh, wait a minute ...
