All Comments on 'A Xmas Song'

Excellent story! Thanks for bringing it back.

Good spin on a classic.

Dicken's might be shaking his head and going "are you really doing this?"... but I don't think he will object

I really loved the twist you put on "A Christmas Carol". Thanks for publishing it again. :)

Excellent story. I'm glad to see it up.

This is back up. Loved its cleverness and excellent writing from the very first. Great job.

Wonderful story! I love how creative it is :)

What an enjoyable story! I loved the touches of humor leavening this emotional retelling of the Dickens classic. Well done!

Well met!

I truly enjoyed this take on Dickens' work!

Looking forward to future works!

I loved it, a nice modern interpretation of a happy ever after story.

Totally brilliant. I think the ghost of Dickens sprinkled you with some magic dust. Excellent writing.

... from the winter holidays competition but so pleased it's back. A great story giving an erotic upto date twist on a classic. Loved the writing and the touches of humour. Well done and I look forward to the next release.

Best retelling of Dicken's classic. 5 ☆s!

Both this and "Wings" should be really cheesy with the emotional hooks you pile into them, but both the beautifully clear and flowing style and the vivid characterisation carry the story a!ong with pace and conviction. I am full of admiration, whether this comes from an excellent imagination matched with tremendous persistence in cleaning up and redrafting, or just a wonderful natural gift for writing. I shall look forward to the other existing stories and I hope others in the future.

An awesome retelling. Loved the way a pursuit of physical pleasure was used in place of the pursuit for wealth.

I really enjoyed your version of a classic. Great description and bring the story to life discribitively.

Loved the way you updated a classic. Your descriptive words painted a sexy image. Liked the use Sexuality as the plot line.

Subski 69

Think Mr Dickens, is pleased with your "modern" rewrite. 5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟