All Comments on 'Abbi's Excuses Ch. 02'

Its got it all . Gangbangs , Cuck's , Orgies , Fires with massive loss of life , and last but not least , Sky Rockets fired out of the Cooches . Oh yeah , the Whore of a wife dies of STD at the end ! Perfection.

HDK , this is how you do it right ! Take notes . I'm giving this 5 stars only because that's as high as the scale allows .

Kill the bitch , I love it

Nice satiere of btb stories. Its got everything for everyone. 5 from me

IT FICTION GUYS!

That being said, LOX ( Liquid Oxygen ) does not flow, or explode for that matter. It's COLD, so the tank would not melt. Now a breach of some sort on the other hand would be spectacular! Pure O2 injected into a fire would make a HUGE blowtorch as the LOX returned to gas as it boils off.

was only in two parts... every time i see a story from the keith, ya know it's too fucked up to be anywhere near realistic... nice piece of fiction and that's about it.... 3 stars, no more, no less.

And I don't mean that in a good way. Somehow, this is even worse than the previous chapter. As satire, it's barely passable. As LW, it's shit.

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Oh, and regarding punctuating dialogue, when one paragraph ends with a quotation mark and the very next one starts with a mark, that indicates the character speaking has changed. When one character is speaking and is not uninterrupted by narrative or another character talking, every paragraph starts with a mark, but only the last one has a closing mark. Her gibberish was written as if it was a conversation.

The feminists that make the claims similar to what this story lays out are usually men involved in human trafficking or women that are supporting those men. So the story is a bit closer to real life then some want to admit... though, if she has syphilitic dementia after three years the narrator has syphilis as well and probably herpes.

More like a twisted comedy show.

I don't like to post negative comments, as I generally believe in encouraging people, but this is just monumentally stupid on all levels.

Even if they are fiction.

Can anyone really write something that over the top sober, or were unauthorized pharmaceuticals involved?

I can’t figure out if this should get a 1 or a 5

This is pure phantasy written by a very angry author.

your first part was really good the second not so much kind of too hard to believe sorry i like your stories

"Sky Rockets From Her Pussy " I'd like to see that! It's amazing what your imagination can conjure up----I'm talking about the fire ball!

Question:- If the fire got to the hydrogen tanks wouldn't it go off "KABOOOOOM" ! Like in the movie with Morgan Freeman, Keanu Reeves! "Chain Reaction"

Yeah You get My Endorsement ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!

Something Jerry Springer would write on meth.

If you thought The First Part was crap ... Don'read this here... The author just can't write!!!

Oops!!!

Using AIDS and other sexually transmitted diseases to get revenge in a story is lazy writing.

How stupid.

If you’re going to make this an unbelievable story about the excesses of corporate greed, corporate sex, and abuse of power then keep the theme going with excessive revenge.

This is, overall, a crap story. Sorry I wasted my time. 2-stars

Geysers if cum! Skyrockets shooting out of adulterous cunts! Showers of sparks! Fires! Conflagrations! Whole neighborhoods burning! Explosions! People ruined!

Hot Damn!

Bitches and bastards burned! Disease! Death! Destruction!

What great fun!

hummmm oh yeah, cuckold lovers are a plenty here so don't worry about it

Well, you didn't leave anything out. Do your characters do anything other than have sex? I'd say they are two-dimensional, but they don't even have that much depth.

Don't you just want to touch that? 🤢🤮

Needed more violence.

Awful story, just plain awful.

I would have gone in there with an oozy and finished them all off leaving not a single one alive.

Stupid, very poorly written, disgusting, unbelievable......There aren't enough adjectives to describe just how truly awful this piece of sh*t "story" is. This is a website for sex stories, that's fine; there are many outstanding writers who post here. As for the rest, they are trying to write something at least passably coherent. This bricolage of fecal waste reads like the ravings of a deranged lunatic. This is the worst pile of crap I have ever read on Literotica. I hope the author seeks and finds help for whatever has gone on in his life.

There are many badly written stories here but this one is the prize winner so far.

Just a gigantic piece of shit. The author (can't even call the buffoon that) is demented and without a shred of talent. He should stick to writing on shit house walls.

Wish I could read this story written by Saddletramp!

Just total garbage, absolute nonsense ⭐️

What a load of shit.

One star is too many for this load of bollocks

Garbage⭐️